Creative

Wie im Titel schon angedeutet hab ich 2 Gedichte geschrieben.Allerdings in englisch, hoffentlich is das kein Problem. Ich würde jetzt zu gerne wissen was andere davon halten. Hier das erste Gedicht:


Never like before

Sadly I don’t know you.
But when I look into your eyes
and see the beautiful smile of you.
I can’t forget, also if I don’t know why’s.

Maybe cause of this strange newly feeling:
Give up could the biggest mistake ever.
So I keep fighting instead of healing.
Also I won’t ever forget, never.

Because, for the first time I ask myself,
What’s right or wrong and what I have to do,
Are you prepared, face the fears of you self?
I believe its worth even it’s not true.

Leave borders behind like never before
All other minds don’t matter no more.
If you would be there. If I could be there.
Oh, if you just take care.

When I’m asleep it seems there is a way.
But dreams are just dreams, they will never stay.
So this is the only chance to dare.
Oh, if you just take care.



Und hier das zweite:

Because of you

Because of you,
times of waiting makes me sick.
Even there are just some clicks
I wish you understand this view.

Because of you,
I’ll wait insane till the end.
And my hopes, I will defend.
I wish my dreams come true

Because of you,
I never want to beset.
And not being a threat.
I wish you just give a clue

Because of you,
I will try my very best.
It comes deep from my chest.
If I just find a sign of you.



Also schreibt was ihr darüber denkt. Danke schonmal für Antworten.

hoefti

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